Book review
Lines Written on the
Anvil
of Melancholy
Pratim Baruah: Sodhahe nohol
tuk o bokul
Published by Aank Baak, Guwhati. 2016.
Price Rs. 100/-
Jyotirmoy Prodhani
Noted
critic and translator, Pradip Acharya, in his keynote speech in the National
Poets Meet of Eastern Languages of Sahitya Akademi in Shillong (19 march,
2016), had particularly mentioned the name of Pratim Baruah as one of the
most promising young poets from Assam and while speaking about the second
collection of his poems, Aru Nirobota,
for which he had received Munin Borkotoky Award in 2014, Prof. Acharya said,
“Pratim’s poems are inscribed with the intimate resonances of silence” For the present collection Pratim Barua begins with a small foreword with a reference
to one of Orhan Pamuk’s statements where
he had said that a poet was one with whom God used to converse. When Pamuk felt
that God was no longer in speaking terms with him he had left writing poems.
Pratim Baruah then writes why he does write poems. You tend to wonder what he
actually meant to say? Why does he write poems then? That God speaks to him? One
would find this rather arrogant. He, however, would confide, despite having
taken Pamuk’s view as true, he was clueless as to why he did keep writing
poems. He is, by his own admittance, overwhelmed by an endless sense of
disquiet and pain and when it comes to his own poems he has his deepest
desolation. Despite the relentless turmoil around him, he remains ever indebted
only to his loneliness and silences. Poetry for him, as he writes, is a ritual
for an intense interface with his disquieting unease and perpetual dismay.
His this collection Xodha
he nohol tuk o Bokul (2016) unveils an inner world of intense solitude and
reverberating silences. For a young
poet, his poetic landscape is rather deeply unsettling and intimately personal.
Born in 1983, Pratim has been a witness to the aftermath of momentous histories
of the land, therefore, more than the pathos of a romantic, his poems are
distinctly characterised by the predicaments of an insane time and the deranged
logic of violence where he, by default, finds himself as an unceremonious insider, a desolate onlooker. The only way for him to recover from this
overwhelming time is to write, the only therapeutic act he can access to. His poem, “Swadhinata” (“Independence”) resonates this exigency with disimpassioned intensity:
I gorged out my
two eyes,
Cut my blue
veins to drench me in red.
I encountered
thousand wars,
Inside me.
Handed down to
all of them
The pennons of
mutiny
And like an
insane soul,
Kept searching
for sovereignty.
The predicament of Frarooq is
equally tense, who had left his native soil to evade the armed forces after
being branded a terrorist for having hosted the militants for a night. He came
back once again crossing seven shores to bid the final adieu to his beloved on
the day of her wedding.
That night Farooq came
...
Who was brought back again by his love
Who was brought back again by his love
To face death once more.
(“Farooq”)
He does not necessarily nurse any inhibition if the flight of his
imaginations finds inspiration from the landscapes of the great bards who are a
part of a formidable legacy, the likes of Navakanta Barua, Ajit Barua et al.
Therefore without trepidation he could confide:
At night I opened my door
Navakanta entered in
And asked me
“Was
there a river here?” (“Events”)
What
makes his poetic oeuvre adimiringly varied and multi layered is his equal
proficiency and intensity to try his hands with narrative poetry as well. “On
Schizophrenia” is one such poem. The
story of a neurologist, Dr. Saikia, who is embroiled in the clumsy negotiation
with his own sense of persona, split into two, where the poet finds himself unwittingly
linked in an aporiac double bind:
The burning cigarette butt slips off my hand.
I am slowly throttled by this complex chemistry of crisisIt turns grim the exuberant hours of all my evenings
And I pick up a pen to write a poem-
My dear reader
Tell me what should I do now?
The burning cigarette butt slips off my hand.
I am slowly throttled by this complex chemistry of crisisIt turns grim the exuberant hours of all my evenings
And I pick up a pen to write a poem-
My dear reader
Tell me what should I do now?
Being a young poet the depth of
his nostalgia is not expected to be that deep, yet his personal history evokes
a serene sense of melancholy as he recounts how the ideal hero that was
personified by the image of his father slowly blurs into a slough of despondency:
When I was young
My father was the hero
Of my imagination and my dreams
As I reached my youth
Those dreams crumbled into
pieces.
(“When I was young”)
(“When I was young”)
The poems in the collection are
divided in three sections. The second and the third sections largely comprise
his short poems. The second section is a mix of his metaphorical and pastoral
compositions. The first group of poems, “Parampita”
(“The Divine Father”), are a deep longing seeking spiritual refinements, in the
second group of short poems Hemanta (“The
Late Autumn”) recurs as a season of pastoral intimacy and also a reference to
make him aware of his urban anxiety:
The
wall clock is
Ticking
by
All around
This
is exuberant silence
The
autumn whiff of wind
Keeps asking
Who
is lonely
The
clock or me?
The third section comprises some
of his finest short poems written with the sharply chiselled lines which have
been his abiding hallmark as a young poet. One such poignant composition is:
In
your shadow
I
build my house
The
shadow
You
left behind
So
many years ago. (“Your shadow”)
Pratim Baruah as a young poet is
rather deceptive, for he writes with an amazingly seasoned hand and refreshing
maturity. He receives the Sahitya Akademi Yuva Puraskar in Assamese
language category for the year 2017. He rightly deserves so. What makes him
stand out among other young voices, is his unexpected felicity with measured
reticence. He would not fancy a word extra if he could manage to say it with
the bare minimum, and this is where he sounds
exceptionally seasoned, beyond the boyish urge to show off with which
most poets begin their career as a poet. His profound emotional pain in
relation to his mother almost finds a thick physical tangibility when he
writes:
I
got stuck, O my mother,
No
matter how much I write
Pouring
blood from my heart,
All
seem so inadequate (“For mother”)
The shorter version of the review was published in the Assam Tribune